Room 14 - Using Characters, Similes and Dialogue

In Room 14, we have been writing stories about monsters using characters, similes and dialogue.  Here are some snippets.
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Furry the angry monster eats his prey in the deep sea where no one ever dares to go.  Boats scattered all around the sea.  Furry wished for a monster friend.  Later that night, he looked around and saw the friend that he had been waiting for.  He looked as friendly as a brother…
By Fletcher

The Megaoctopus emerged from the deep.  He lived in the stormy seas where ships vanished to the ocean floor never to be seen again.  Captain Seahong trapped the ships that vanished in 1847…
By Mindy

The Mermaid Monster was lurking in the forest to find water.  Each day, she tried to look for more water but there was none anywhere.  Then another monster came along and told her where to find some water.  The problem was that the water was protected by a big boss…
By Zodiac

Robyir the monster robbed a shop.  He was tired from robbing the shop so he went to his dark black cave.  The next day a fox came to the little dark black cave.  The fox ran into the cave and he hid there with the monster.  The fo got a fright.  The monster said, “Who are you?”  I am Robyir…
By Ollie

The deep dark creature lives in the watery cave that is 400m wide and 400m tall.  He has two eyes in the middle of his mouth as well as his teeth.  His rib bones are exposed and you can see his beating heart.  It is terrifying!
By Elijah

The Megladon crashed into my boat.  I had to fight the Megladon.  It lives in the deep sea.  Don’t go near it, it will swallow you whole.  He was as big as a blue whale.  Along came Captain Barnickles, caught him and put a tracker on him.  He swam as fast as a dog fish.  “I’ll see you later, " said Captain Barnickles…
By Landen

The Megladon lurked under the waves.  He was as huge as a tower.  He wanted a new friend.  One day a monster friend came along.  He was named Fangor. 
By Jake

The Teketeke is a no legged monster.  He lives in Tokyo, Japan.  He lurks around you on the trains.  He is very dangerous.  He comes out in the dark tunnels.  People dare not go there because he is as slimy as an octopus.  
By Moana

The Silk Monster, named Lilly, lived in a small silky cottage.  It sat in the middle of a stormy island.  But the problem was the Giant, Mr Stampalot.  Lilly did not like the Giant.  He stamped and crashed his feet everywhere when he walked.  Lilly’s body shook timidly when he came in sight…
By Indie

The Hallway monster waits for its moment to pounce.  He lives in the shadowy, scary ends of hallways.  When his moment came, he jumped out of the shadows and landed on a little girl named Aleisha.  Aleisha screamed so loudly that it woke the neighbours.  When the neighbours woke…
By Amalia